Daily+journal+kyler

**10/13/09** **Daily Journal** **Style Writing**
 * Kyler Kane**
 * The author obviously knows what he is talking about, his style and word choice showed he was confident in what he was saying. He advocated key points that many writers make mistakes at. I would like to say I commend him for saying so much in a short amount of text. I was surprised he added to choose a topic you care about. I would have said that was a given personally. If someone is forced to do something a multitude of variables are thrown into their writing (or what they need to be doing). For instance I have had many assignments where I have hated the thing I am forced to write so I just put the least amount of effort into it, just for the passing grade. Aggression comes into play when one is forced to write meaninglessly.**
 * I would have to say out of everything he said the only thing that really struck me would have to be, sound like yourself. I say this because I write the way I think and feel. If I do not like what I am writing I will make it known by the language I choose to use in the paper. But there are cons to this as well, If you cannot speak properly (Or choose not too) then I think you should not write like yourself. (**** J ) I personally cannot stand when someone writes in slang or ghetto. I don’t mind if someone tries to write a paper and just isn’t good at it, but if you use words like aint or ppl when you could have just said people! Then I would strongly urge the writer to not be themselves.**